Reblogged from Tamára Out Loud:
"Yes, the whole study center did hear about your making out with gay people," he said.
"Gay guys," I clarified.
"Well, I didn't want to make any assumptions..."
"I suppose that's fair."
I had been using the Christian Study Center's tranquil space to work on my book for several weeks, and working so closely with people's heartbreaking stories had been…
The core of your writing while appearing agreeable originally, did not really work properly with me personally after some time. Somewhere within the sentences you actually managed to make me a believer but only for a very short while. I however have got a problem with your leaps in logic and one would do nicely to fill in those breaks. If you can accomplish that, I would undoubtedly be amazed.